So far, it's a solid read, but there aren't many chapters. Although I don't really like the money system, it's not the worst, as for the merchant part, I can't really say so far, he's sold some stuff and we've seen some customer service, though it can get old after a while. It was cool the first time but after that, it’s just a waste of words and less content in the chapter. Rather than reading all that, I would prefer a summary of the day. So far novel is about gathering materials and having adventures, with being a merchant as a subplot, which I don't particularly enjoy. However, I like how he is dealing with the alchemist association.
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Thanks for the criticism, I will continue to improve the story to be more engaging and for the merchant part it will going to be more interesting starting from the volume 2, since volume 1 is just starting point for Nikos (Vol1 is just a couple chapters left) . Like the synopsis says he will eventually become a merchant king, not in one continent but the whole world; which mean he's going to be the one who control the world economy. Lastly, I'm grateful that you spend your times to read my story. Hope you keep entertained by it.
