Its good but mc paths is too thorny and disapointing . Its sad because mc's ways of doing things is like sacrificing his close ones for strangers.naive thinking of being a hero . I though his persona in a latter chal will be a nonchalant voldigoad. I just think it because he choose its power .his friend and love ones is already tired of figthing but he keep pushing things out. That he makes me think that he is just copying the og kevin.way of doing thinks . Sometimes he knew whats gonna happend but did nothing to prevent it . And the higher ups is already annoying why not be the higher ups ? Kevin in yur story is making of many What if . What if .what if . Dont wory bro ur good at making novels its just not compatible with me ,because i already read too many novels .so sorry if i think that yur mc is too saint,holy mother ,naive and too righteous
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