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Review Detail of omiguh in Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic

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Updating stability is great, you get one most days so nothing to complain there. The story development is alright, I’ve never seen the show and we are technically not at the shows start so I don’t know how accurate to canon it will be but I’m enjoying it. What I would like to see more would be other POVs occasionally. It would not only make the story development better but also make the character design of other characters better to see from their perspective. We only see from the MCs perspective except a third person pov for a paragraph at the end of a random chapter. So seeing from other peoples pov would definitely help the characters. The world building is alright. It was much better at the beginning of the novel which is probably not a good sign. And now for the writing quality. Honestly, I think I can say for everyone that this is the most important aspect for any story. I can deal with a shitty story if the quality is great. It would be annoying but manageable. The quality started off good. I’ve seen much better but compared to other people on WebNovel, no way in hell am I complaining about the quality. But as the story progressed I did notice the quality worsen overtime and right now I would grade it as passable or ok. But it could be because I’m currently on his Patreon and maybe the author hasn’t edited the chapters for WebNovel. I’m not sure but I hope the author starts fixing this, I mean I see wrong words, missed punctuation, the sentences are missing words, some of the sentences become incredibly choppy or just make no sense. Anyway, it’s currently a good story and I hope it will stay that way

Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic

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