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nachtLv147mth
2024-08-20 03:16

character interaction is stiff, and the flow of the story feels clunky and not smooth enough for me, but despite this bad quality, i have fun reading this fanfic.

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MoonEater8
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DarkDei
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Can anyone give me the original title plz ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan, cause saw in chapter 54 that it sounds like there was yuri

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CouchPotatoDandy
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A nice fanfic but the author tried to do too much comedy and although it was funny sometimes, often it was too over the top and was bad. The grammar is bad, just a tiny bit better than MTL, there are many mistakes everywhere. I reached chapter 40 and dropped it.

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Every thing was going well until Chinese elements started to appear, ik it's Chinese ff but..🙁I don't know which direction will the story go after this but it got me disinterested(Chinese cultivation elements and bulshet beasts, for god's sake even if its an ff it's Japanese first) Kudos to translation for translation this shet but Slippers to author, you better stop writing or else i will develop a new corona and send it to you. Junior Dieee!

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good work, keep it up :)

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