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Darksiidde
DarksiiddeLv115mth
2024-07-20 23:06

This work has a lot of potential. It has a really different plot than what we are used to on this platform, with a very interesting proposal. The characters so far have a great background and notable psychological progress (something very important). The MC is smart, something that makes me very happy, nothing is as bad as a stupid MC. Well, I believe that if the Author doesn't give up on this work, it will be a masterpiece indeed. Be careful not to deviate too much from the work's proposal and maintain a cohesive line of reasoning with the original background.

World Isekai

TheAbyssWritesBack
4.9
107 Chs

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TheAbyssWritesBack
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Thanks a lot! It’s truly motivating, I’ll keep doing my best to not let anyone down !

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Typeshitnakjda
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would you like to read my novel ?

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Bradley_Killick
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any romance?

TheAbyssWritesBack:Thanks a lot! It’s truly motivating, I’ll keep doing my best to not let anyone down !
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From the first chapter, you can tell that this book is something different. The writing quality is excellent, and the story advances steadily, not too fast and not too slowly. Most, if not all, characters have a good design and are introduced into the book reasonably. The main characters' powers just don't come from defeating monsters in a dungeon but also have a unique twist on it, which is very cool and versatile. In the future, there are many ways that I can think of that the main character can use to become stronger and more powerful if he wishes to do so. The world's background is alright. There are not enough chapters to give a valid opinion yet. Overall, I think this book deserves 5 stars, and it has a lot of potential to live up to.

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Hi everyone-- - Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to reply to everything - I've been writing this for some time now, and my only hope is that most of you have a good time reading it. I've taken an approach I think is less into the 'typical' video-game genre. If you're expecting a lot of grind, a lot of leveling and item farming you'll be surprised with something different, yet (hopefully) enjoyable.

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the book is really good. It's been a while since I've picked something up on Web novel and haven't been able to put it down. it gets dark and twisted at times. but everyone needs that little bit of darkness in their life. only downfall is waiting for the next chapters to release 😭

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This might be a slightly biased review, but after hearing about this novel almost everyday for a while now, I finally read it. It's quite good! better than what I expected, and I am starting to be eager to read more of it. Before reading this work I thought it might not be my exact cup of tea, but here we are, I enjoyed it. I'm happy to support a friend, and if anyone else feels like it, I encourage doing the same. This novel deserves a chance. And it's my truest feeling if I say I am still hoping to get a physical copy one day, a signed physical copy!

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