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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv55mth
2024-09-22 23:49

As of chapter 39: On the grammar front this fanfic is okay and I couldn't find any mistakes. On the plot side this fanfic progress okay and I didn't get bored while reading or found any plot hole. The characters themselves also feel alive and not mechanical or robotic. The harem and s*x is also not forced or illogical but flowed quite well. Overall, I will give this fanfic five stars

Naruto : Hentai Corruption

Synian
4.1
83 Chs

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

Though I forgot to add that the author sometimes deleted my chapter comments, so take that into consideration...

5mth
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Synian
SynianAuthor

Ayo man. I just deleted your comment ONCE and that was a mistake. Don't announce it like that.... It will send wrong message to the audience💀

4mth
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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

True, I later understood that it was a mistake.

Synian:Ayo man. I just deleted your comment ONCE and that was a mistake. Don't announce it like that.... It will send wrong message to the audience💀
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Shubhammi1
Shubhammi1Lv13

if you drop this then you are gay.......

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ShenrenLonelyCloud
ShenrenLonelyCloudLv1

Unlike other fanfics, author isn't messing up with old incidents. Main character has some really overpowered abilities that can be used for his goals. This was a great read. Author should keep it up

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OneWound
OneWoundLv4

This is great, can't wait for the fiesty parts. Keep up the good work author.

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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Very interesting read, im not fan of NTR Main Charakters, but after reading your reasons, i aggre with your opinion about OG Naruto, this is why im mostly read stories with diffrent personality wise Naruto.

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I_am_not_done
I_am_not_doneLv1

One of the best fanfic of naruto I've ever seen. It's really awesome but bro you should upload chapters everyday and I've joined your patreon too. Hope this novel would be a long journey😍 Keep it up author🤩

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huH2
huH2Lv4

dang i need the pic Sakura is so thiccccc

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50points
50pointsLv15

honestly i am not a fan of fanfics and tend to avoid most but this story was recommended to me and I actually liked it. For once the MC is not already a character in the story they are an outside presence and their ability is rather interesting. the only reason I didn't 5/5 this review was due to the fact I feel it doesn't update enough and I find myself going back and checking to see if there is anything new to read. If anything that just shows you wish to continue reading the story and in no way is that a real negative.

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Fieldbreaker
FieldbreakerLv4

I must say I really like the story. The MC really is easy to like. I still had to take a few points off. I really like Naruto and thought it was a shame that everyone, even Hinata, laughed at Naruto. It's not Naruto's fault but rather the simplified conditions for Genin that Naruto fails with his huge chakra reserves. I like the rest of the story anyway.

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