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Lord_Aesir
Lord_AesirLv25mth
2024-07-06 01:09

The story is too fast even for someone like me who likes fast paces novels, It's don't feel right for me. Like I really don't like fics which drag things too much but this one is too fast for my taste.

Naruto: Monkey Sage

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3.0
27 Chs

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BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv4

storyline is moving too fast and also weird conversations that just don't end up working. slow down give personality ti the characters(even the mc is boring and emotionless)

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STEVIOL_GLY
STEVIOL_GLYLv3

idk if authors snubbing reviews or something, but its bad, the power levelmakes no sense- he is getting 1 point per day which increases his strength by 1/3rd of elite join stat- and he keeps complaining that its too small increase and the ninja war is near- when in reality by the speed he is getting these points, which don't have an increment in need, he will max by the time of chunnin exams and a god by the time naruto time skip happens.

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Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Full_superior123
Full_superior123Lv4

I’m just here to hate I system story’s they are dumb and being reborn as main or side characters as well.

6mth
mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

There are some flaws, like being too fast, but I prefer it this way rather than the Naruto Gamer fanfic that takes 300 chapters to start the classic Naruto. Seriously, at this pace, the author will take about 2 to 3 thousand chapters to finish the novel. If I can choose, I prefer a fast pace as it has a better chance of delivering an ending. Thank you for your work, author.

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ParadoxMind
ParadoxMindLv13

Not a good story. It lacks any sort of character or creativity. It just goes like: Oh no, I'm Asuma! I'm gonna die! Ooohhh, I have a system! Silly me! Nothing of importance happens. He gets monkey summon. It's *dramatic drumroll* Son Wukong! Now that I have this 'legendary' monkey friend, I should change my whole fighting style on a random whim! Directly before my serious mission in fact! Proceeds to creatively go on 'wave mission'. I haven't read further, but that's it. I don't think it' gonna get better. Cheers, I guess?

5mth
Adriana7885
Adriana7885Lv12

This is dropped, but I’m not even mad about it although keep in mind it is pretty fast paced

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Lizrock
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Jesus_Sienra
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Reveal spoiler

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