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Luc4r1o
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2024-07-17 01:17

I started this novel yesterday and i am almost done with the last few chapters . there are a few he/she mistakes and at times there is a missing word but nothing that bothers too much. The update stability is great. I like the pacing as it is not too fast and not too slow. The only thing that i would love is a few chapters of pov from the girls and hearing their thoughts about everything. Like every 5 to 10 or 15 chapters. but otherwise give it a chance because it's a great novel start and i believe if the author keeps it up like this than this novel has great potential .

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Naughty_J
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Thanks for the review. I will try to take your feedback and give more insight into the POV of the girls. Also, if you ever find mistakes, please report them to me by leaving a comment on the said paragraph, if you wish.

Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

is it droppee author?

Naughty_J:Thanks for the review. I will try to take your feedback and give more insight into the POV of the girls. Also, if you ever find mistakes, please report them to me by leaving a comment on the said paragraph, if you wish.
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