I've snorted glue and rambled more coherently than this novel. This is most likely written by sheogorath on a skooma binge. Like the idea but its for one too fast paced power ups too fast and frequent. The moment I read about the marriage contracts I freaking cringed. overall a good read I recommend it as an interrogation tool.

too much for a harem with no back story just take the best family , race and other shit and threw them to the MC as for courting girls ? the mc just wave his hand and hug her and boom welcom to the harem and dont let me start with the system all those powers with no practical use bitch please this is bad

it's just a mush. I don't understand what's going on and how it happened!

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You had me at palico and lost me at femboy.

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To be honest, it's terrible. The incoherent hasty narration makes you sympathize with the author and wonder if he is in a fever. However, maybe this will change by the later chapters, I want to treat such authors positively and believe in their growth above themselves, I could only withstand 15 chapters. I'm putting a triple as a support.

Honestly I don't understand why it's so low rated I mean yeah it's fast paced and a bit of a crack fic but it's pretty alright, It doesn't deserve all the hate. And author thank you for writing this I was bored and found this please don't stop writing.

tu historia me gusta y como es de flujo rapido no es aburrido siempre esta haciendo una cosa u otra lo cual tambien esta bn el unico problema es tu sistema tiene como 30 objetos al mes pero los usa? osea la mayoria de esos objetos o habilidades solo estan alli si me acuerdo los uso sino no , mas que dar un monton de cosas al azar es divertido verlas utilizarlos por eso algunas novelas solo colocan lo que gana en gachas cuando aparece algo bueno apesar que sale todos los dias o dice cosas como vendere esto o le regalare esto a o comere un poco de eso ademas de escenas para ciertos objetos la cantidad despues de que obtiene algunas habilidades no importa es como cuando salen 50 habilidades diferentes pero de nada sirve si el prota solo usa las mas faciles o utiles por eso es mejor dar atributos de tipo pasiva antes que habilidades es como tener 50 espadas legendarias pero solo tengo 2 manos