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Fallency
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2024-06-23 18:40

Too few chapters to write a review, but so far so good. Pace is a little slow and the story follows some common tropes, but it is easy to read. A synopsis, frequent updates, and cover could do wonders! Sending the author some good vibes! Keep writing!

THE MAFIAS FORBIDDEN LOVE

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haha...thanks alot. I'll Tey my best to keep you entertained [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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