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I think it's time to give myself the usual shameless author review. Thanks to everyone who's read and reviewed my book! Your support means a lot to me, and I hope to have many more readers in the future. I hope this story receives the love it deserves! Now, about the story itself... The idea came to me after reading Manhwas like A Barbaric Proposal, Serena, The Beast Within, and Absolute Threshold. I was inspired to create a story set in 20th century Avalia, a country similar to Italy. I'm working hard to bring this world to life! Initially, I considered setting the story in Korea, but then I became fascinated with 20th century Italy and its mafia organizations. I thought, "Why not add some supernatural twists?" And so, the story began to take shape. Creating complex, morally grey, and realistic characters has been a challenge, but it's also been incredibly fun! I'm particularly eager to hear your thoughts on Bianca and Achille. Am I doing them justice? Are there any aspects of their characters that you'd like to see explored further? If you have any questions about the book or its world, feel free to ask! I'd love to hear your theories or predictions about where the story is headed. Some specific questions to get you started: - What do you think of the pacing so far? Are there any moments that felt rushed or slow? - How do you feel about the supernatural elements? Are they integrated well into the story? - Are there any characters you'd like to see more of? Any relationships you're curious about? Thanks again for reading, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts!

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