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Despite being in the fanfiction section, this is a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic and you can definitely tell. The story isn't particularly well written and filled with a lot of the clichés typically found in Chinese novels (especially xianxia), despite being set in Dragon Ball. The translation is also terrible, especially when it comes to the characters names. It feels like the translator just ran the raws through MTL and couldn't even be bothered to properly edit the result...