This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it's minor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!

Author. AUTHOR! The MC was relatable to an extent. I liked this work very much. From the first chapter till the chapter I've read, there were no boring moments. Fr. Writing style is nice!! Words flow easily and everything is pretty easy to understand! I love the animatedness of the characters and the dynamic between Lilo and cutie! The synopsis is great and I won't say anything more (⁠☞⁠^⁠o⁠^⁠)⁠ ⁠☞ go read this novel, quick!

i forgot the summary of this, cause the start was good but after reading this far(chapter 42) I think this isn't for. this is just Thor to me if in marvel🤗 and i don't like him much ps. gudluck

I like the concept of an MMA fighter's reincarnation, who is already trained in combat, can't wait for more chapters.

Good grammar, a rather interesting premise and an atypical power system and a world that is in the same vein, not much else to say, it's a solid read.

If you enjoy a interesting novel with a MC that reminds of you the anime, Baki. A interesting society and world-building, give it a try! There are a few things that needs to improve, however the whole premisse and the idea behind it has a lot of potential to be a great novel. I hope the author continues!

MMA fighter in a new world which is a beautiful blend of our world with fantasy. Unique and well thought out power system with vivid descriptions. If you love urban fantasy with a slice of horror, this book is perfect for you. Keep it up Author.

Not going to lie, this story came out of nowhere. I enjoyed the environment the MC isn't your average edge lord, but he isn't completely sane either. A fun read so far can't wait to see where it goes.

The world and storybuilding are unique and intriguing. Occasional lapses in spelling/grammar don’t distract from the plot or characters; overall the writing quality is better than most of Webnovel. I find Soda to be a compelling and interesting foil to Lilo, and the concepts here are not just your typical copy and paste reincarnation story. I think if the publishing stability holds, this book will do well. Keep up the good work, Author!!

Shameless self appraisal: I like fun light hearted stories that will lift your spirits. But this one got a lil kick to it, sorry to the peaceful slice of life enthusiasts… we may involve a bit of spicy moments of action, thriller and mystery. I also enjoy punk-esk themes, so be prepared to witness sci-fi merge with fantasy. If I had to describe this story as a food it would be: fruit salad. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed creating it. 자ㄹ머개스ㅁ니다 😋