*writing at the time of ch9 Very hooked into this story so far // pacing is good, plot is intriguing, haven't seen anything wrong with the grammar, and overall it's great. My favorite part so far are the monster designs, and the horror part of them. The Cloud Collector is def my favorite chapter so far, just extremely creepy and cool. looking forward to more, def recommend
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