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This Star Wars fanfic is an excellent beginning. The story shows promise, and the writing quality is impressive. Overall, it deserves a read.

Welcom back, Im loking forward for this one. .

A start to an amazing fanfic. Not many star wars fanfics, even less that are decent or havent been dropped. Im happy to say this Gem doesn't fall in that category. I love the MC SO far and the development of the story its still coming together, the bigger picture of this story, and where it'll head but still worthy of a 5 star rating at this point. Keep up the good work.

Just wanna say love the story, I'm not the best at expression through words ... just know that this story makes me feel happy and I hope you continue writing at your own pace *cough* *cough* unless you happwn to be inspired to put up 2 chapters sometimes ;)

I absolutely adore it and think it's fantastic, with nothing further to add. ❤️

hello just some random reader passing by, this story is one of my favourited story the author don't change too much of the real SW storyline (which i liked it) because some of the other fan-fic change 360 of the storyline. Anyways thanks author for this masterpiece story

Demonun Great Fanfic Keep up your great work You can do this Star Wars fanfic idea immediately after Star Wars : Arise In The Future A Star Wars Fanfic where it is one year before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jay Garner after meeting a God gets put into the Star Wars Galaxy after he dies from being struck by lightning in his previous world. Can he build up his Sovereign in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he succumb to Darkness. Home Base Planets: Koboh and Shattered Moon Harem Duchess Satine Kryze Padme Amidala Teckla Minnau Nala Se Neeyutnee Miraj Scintel Tryla Letta Turmond Queen Julia Latts Razzi Twazzi Rumi Paramita Trella Bare'Ah Peppi Bow Chuchi Lolo Purs Mina Bonteri Aayla Secura Rafa Martez Trace Martez Ahsoka Bariss Offee shaak ti Mother Talzin Morgan Elsbeth Asajj Ventress Aura Sing Mon Mothma

I am in love with this fanfic. It is so great and it seems that the actual story is going to pick up very soon as well. It does start off a bit slow in the start, but as the story progressed it had me watching prequels, OT and rebel short because it captured the first time i saw star wars. But that asside the story is a masterpiece and even though we know the whole story of a galaxy far far away, it still keeps you on edge at times. I really recomend giving this a read, and don't mind the small grammar mistakes.