webnovel
Dai_Lo
Dai_LoLv423d
2024-12-29 17:01

The Writing and humor is very funny/amusing it’s world setting and writing style is pretty detailed for a Webnovel story keep up the good work !

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
System_Department
System_DepartmentAuthor

I’ve noticed most Webnovel  books don’t clunk up their synopsis with what the story entails like most traditional books and instead the author gives a personal review to explain a few things… often very shamelessly too. So here I am to try and do the same, hopefully this review saves you the time if the book isn’t what you’re looking for. Writing Quality: You’ll come across very mistakes in the story and though I’m no English scholar, I think the grammar is at worst average. So no worries here. Update Stability: 7 or more chapters each week. More if power stone goals are met or gifts are given. I’m sweet like that.  Story Development: This where things get tricky. The story is slice of life but don’t let that fool into thinking we’ll just be seeing the MC do mundane things over and over again. The story is a comedy first, urban progression second and slice of life third. In summary, this story doesn’t take itself at all seriously and that’s intentional. It’s a slow but entertaining journey of the MC in a very ‘unique’ world. World Background: Speaking of world, this is perhaps one of the stories biggest selling points in my personal opinion. It takes place in an alternate reality that will seem very familiar and unfamiliar at the same time. If you read the disclaimer and understand it then you already know how fun of a world this will be to see. To give a hint, imagine our current world was one where superhumans existed and are solid part of society. This may be the most love/hate aspect of the story as some may find it annoying while others incredibly entertaining, we shall wait and see. Character Design: I promise all shapes and sizes but I know that’s not what this means so I’ll explain the more boring stuff. The characters are well thought out and I’ve got to great lengths to ensure they don’t seem two dimensional in the least. I of course can’t do this for every single character in the story to the same extent but you get what I mean.  All in all, I’d say give this a try and see for yourself. The chapters are all free as of this comment. If it’s not for you, just leave it. If you like it but hate certain aspects, lemme know in a comment or review and if you love it, also lemme know, it’s nice to know my work is appreciated and motivates me to write more.  Whoever sees this and doesn’t read 20 chapters of the book is gae.

Related Stories

The Invincible Full-Moon System

The sinful acts of humanity bring forth a great calamity upon themselves, or so they thought. Supernatural Emergence happened. Supernatural creatures start to come out of nowhere and forcefully claim half of the Earth and massacre any humans that cross their paths. All of them are too powerful, dozens of countries fall under their diabolic claws. Humanity was pushed against the corner. But things started to turn around when humanity began to awaken magical powers. Awakened is the name for those who awaken these powers blessed by the Gods, and they become the pillars of humanity. Rex Silverstar is a normal boy who has a traumatic experience. On the day of the Supernatural Emergence, a Werewolf takes everything he has. He lost his family and his home, left alone in this cruel world. What drives him to live every day is his deep hatred towards the Supernaturals. Joining the military in the hope of helping exterminate the Supernaturals from an early age, he found out that it's impossible to kill the Werewolf that was responsible for killing his parents without being an Awakened. On a fateful night, in a near-death experience, he's given a chance by the full moon. It was the turning point of his life. Obtaining a System that allows him to become stronger, having the potential to match and surpass the Supernaturals, Rex was ecstatic until he saw his stats window. "I'M NOT A WEREWOLF!!" "Daily quest failed, sanity stat has been decreased by 20%!" "Sanity stat is too low, you are unable to contain the blood moon blessing!" "Starting forceful transformation!" "WHAT?! I'm a human! What transformation?!" "You are overwhelmed with bloodlust!" ----- Join my discord: https://discord.gg/cg6a5sBkpJ Support me here: https://ko-fi.com/mrboogey13 ----- I do not own the cover of the book, if you made it and want to take it down just say so and I will immediately change it.

Mrboogey13 · Fantasy
3.9
1431 Chs