I will briefly describe this fanfic so that its low rating is clear. This is another novel about a person from our world getting caught up in a villain/minor character/NPC from a book/game that the MC read/played. The idea is not original, but it is still interesting when executed well. So, this work is not that case. Literally, the main character has neither character nor any story, he is bored in his reality before getting caught, since he cannot find a worthy opponent and feel alive again The author decided to make him a combat maniac who is not interested in anything else - Okay, so be it. But after the rebirth, the fun part begins - the body into which the MC moves is the body of a typical aristocratic villain who has no skills and who leads the life of a vegetable. But suddenly he develops amazing skills and behaves completely differently. And no one cares about this - he has matured, hid his skills. This is what the butler says, who has been looking after him all his life, and even his father. Imagine that your brother or relative suddenly began to demonstrate something that he had never been able to do. Will you say everything is ok? Talent? Or maybe he managed, living in a closed family society, to hide his strength? I admit that things might get better, but I really doubt it. Author, work on your skills, think through your work before publishing it. Google Translate
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yuvraj_rathji:Come on dude don't be so harsh on him first of all there is no one who writes these novel as fan-fiction so he must be experimenting his writing skills or you know his creativity.
yuvraj_rathji:Come on dude don't be so harsh on him first of all there is no one who writes these novel as fan-fiction so he must be experimenting his writing skills or you know his creativity.