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STBull100
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2024-07-07 19:35

A good start to a well written novel. Looking forward to more chapters 😁

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Dark_Reaper
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Boring start you mean..

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Alanray64
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This started out as an interesting novel but rapidly dropped into mediocrity. The novel is done first person and really I think that this is what kills it. He overthinks, waffles on about being low key and not bringing travesty down upon himself and family and basically this just makes a person lose interest with the character in general. When reading, it really does not give the reader a sense of connection and feels like instead I am reading a shopping list of things to do. The MC tends to wander in descriptions and goes off on tangent when suddenly, skips back by commenting he was going off topic or was wandering. One particular detail the author uses is continually bloating word count with status screen information, it is used often and virtually the list is so long, filled with skills etc, that I just skip way past it. It isn’t needed and I am sure that this could be handled in a simpler manner. Basic synopsis MC is reborn into a world as the youngest son of a Viscount. Standard tropes are revealed, a marriage arrangement, receiving OP skills, miraculously surviving certain death scenarios, faction fighting within the family and of course earning the enemity of a potential protagonist. There are other classic tropes included but just read and find them. A lot of his issues is his previous lifes morals and values etc, which are really not totally applicable in his current environment. Currently the MC is in a new world of much potential but he just seems to wimpy to me. (My opinion) his attitude towards slavery, to beast and monster summoning was to overthought and could have been handled far better, but again.. my opinion. I did give it a fair go, forget what chapter I made it to but in the end I decided enough and move on. Overall the concept is interesting, the section where he discovers the Nexus coukd have been done better and developed further but was never allowed to reach its potential. Anyways, a number of readers will like it and I do encourage those to decide for themselves if it is for them.

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