Don't ask me, I heard it's a ritual here to give 5 stars.

Pretty mediocre all around. This being tagged as a fast-paced story, the aspect is entirely overblown in the introductory chapters. Everything before chapter 11 is sped through with hardly any proper explanation until after the fact. Especially that friend of his that was just suddenly thrown into the mix. Not to mention the subsequent betrayal of said friend. The entire situation in itself felt forced if I’m being honest. The MC despite having power that’s at the peak of his current “universe”, had it sealed, this leading to his death at the hands of people weaker than him. Reading the synopsis, this sequence of events can of course be seen coming, but the ways it’s written is entirely unnatural. Now reincarnated into his 3rd life, the pace of the story has significantly slowed down where it feels like hardly anything is happening. There also being the issue of his current body that has subpar talent, he struggling to even advance within the initial realms of a supposed lower world, barely eeking out wins in fights against beast. The OP and invincible tags? I’ve seen nothing thus far alluding to such as the MC is shown to be having an annoyingly difficult time with things that should be beneath him. Please don’t include such tags if you can’t deliver on it. Had higher expectations for this novel, and they seem to have failed me.

"endless cultivation" saved my life It only has 3 chapters but already this good ? Idk what to expect at 100 When they say "PEAK" if endless cultivation doesn't come to your mind idk what you are reading

Insane and amazing, i really recommend this

Hello, Secret_Ethereal here, A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. Someday, the day will come!

Very good story, well I don't have anything much to say cause that's all in my mind? Well whatever it's a great story and would recommend reading

Great novel. It has an interesting concept and read. It's different from the usual generic stuff for the most part. I think the author should work on looking into new, more realistic concepts of physics and other sciences. It'll take quite an interesting turn.

You should describe the side characters more to make the novel more immersive, you didn't introduce the characters of mc mother and father much neither any of his clan mates, and da*m the time skips.

Introduce some fml early in the story to make the harem better and have a decent backstory, and don't make the harem members annoying or useless like 90 percent of other cultivation novels

This has a good start for a new writer but you can upgrade your vocabulary to introduce more concepts and choose better words for many concepts, i like the suffering of the mc the best in this