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Zakfiel_03
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2024-06-02 18:26

This is cool, the truth is that the proposal sounds interesting.............................................................................................

One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

Uchicha_Remant
4.0
94 Chs

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Requien
RequienLv15

I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring

5mth

Uchicha_Remant
Uchicha_RemantAuthor

I am willing to be shameless and give myself good review

5mth
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.

5mth
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw

5mth
KeazL_
KeazL_Lv12

RAW : 航海：开局天龙人，拿下汉库克 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

5mth
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕

3mth
PRIMORDIAL_09
PRIMORDIAL_09Lv4

FINALLY! we getting a celestial dragon as a mc!!

5mth
unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14

Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author

5mth
DaoistgLZGKT
DaoistgLZGKTLv13

Great fanfic so far. Author doing a pretty good translation and the story is also smooth, hopefully it continue so.

5mth
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

Just a translation with a bad story.

4mth
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