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HolyPepe
HolyPepeLv105mth
2024-08-03 04:51

The grammar is on par with the ones I had read so huge hands up for that. The characters are also interesting. The only down side is it's slow-paced. It's understandable though since it seemed like the MC's growing up is part of the plot. All in all, a good book but still could be improved especially some grammatical errors. I'm waiting for the MC to grow up so I could see some 'action'. I'd let this book marinate first before reading again. Would highly recommend to people.

The Emperor Is Bored Today

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Grammar wise, okay, usual to WN. I like the characters and they are a fun read. Though, it must be said that the book is pretty slow-paced, which has to do with the general concept of this novel and the whole growing up thing. I do think it's nice to see the MC grow up, but it's kind of unfortunate that we have to wait it out rn until more exciting things happen when the MC becomes a teenager or an adult. All in all, pretty good, would recommend it to people, but gotta have more chapters first, so keep it up, author!

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