The book is really nice I like how the events follow each other .it's really interesting good work to the author,you are doing well.waiting to see how the book will progress

amazing start from the novel, really cool. Start implementing more character building for other characters and preferably add a main villain. but its really amazing

There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.

Very refreshing, gives appreciation to story pacing and steady progress. A wonderful work by the author, great job!

Story is fairly interesting, and has a lot of potential. I am excited to see where the author takes the story. While the story has a number of good points such as having an interesting concept, strong system and a fairly smart non beta MC, it also has several problems that I’d hope to see improve as the story continues. I don’t believe the author is a native English speaker though i coudl be wrong, so there are a number of wrongly used words, places with poor grammar, misspelled words and general dissonance in the story, though they have little impact on the story itself and don’t affect the reading experience that much. There are also a number of strange choices, background information and world building decisions that negatively impact the flow and immersion of the story but they aren’t too numerous or aggregious and I think that as the author continues they should improve in this aspect. Overall it’s a promising novel and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens