Review Detail of DaoOfCulture in I'm reborn as Rudeus Greyrat

The story and idea are great, but jesus christ, the grammar needs work. From what I infer, the author already wrote these chapters, and he's just splitting them apart into chunks before posting. I have no clue how much chapters he has stocked up, but he should either implement the readers' suggestion for improving quality or try editing earlier chaps. For example, 1. Stick with one name per character (preferably the correct one). The author has misspelled Ghislaine multiple times in different ways 2. Maybe use brackets or some form of indicator for the system messages, e.g., [System message here] 3. Use quotes instead of dashes for the dialogue cus I still get confused about how tf the author is using the dashes at times, e.g., "Hello" 4. Run the chapters through a FREE grammar checker, e.g., grammarly, chatgpt, etc. 5. Proofread your work, and please for the love of God fix the pronouns. 6. This is a personal suggestion, but NEVER get peer pressured by the readers in deciding the direction your story takes. It never ended well from what I've seen. And you seem to be cooking some good ideas so you should be good 7a. I think you mentioned you are in Ukraine at some point in one of the chapters? I am not sure if you are using a translator, and I do not know if you even know english, so in that case, set up a discord 7b. Link discord to patreon such that the readers have to go to discord in order to read the chapters, and such you can hopefully more easily get suggestions for fixing grammar in the story. Patreon is also not reader friendly in that the options to filter chapters are limited, and you can't even sort them. Ig discord is the same in that aspect, but patreon gui is still mid af in my opinion 7c. Lastly, with a discord, you can have an interactive community where you can share ideas and get some feedback. Maybe set up some bots for some mini games like anigame or something Overall, it's a good fic, but the grammar is severely lacking in various aspects