The writing is god awful. The speech distinction is really bad and makes it a little hard to know who is speaking at any one time. grammar is kinda out the window. But its a fanfiction of a story with an already well developed world and characters and he does them decent justice. I am mainly reading because I enjoy the magic progression and general divergence from canon.
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