overall its good 👍, just one problem...... its too JAPANESE!!mawgawd the mc is so trusting,he behaves the average Japanese mc too spineless,too soft ,believes in the power of friendship...... OK I'm done ranting. but I do recommend this

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While i usually dont curse this much while reading this novel it had me cursing like a sailor if it's author's first novel i want to respectfully mention to step up your game if not then please just read your own works once, twice, maybe thrice before uploading

The story keeps jumping and is very hard to follow

So many plot holes, the mc is a wimp, and lacks almost any intelligence. Bro had a rifle fighting in a dungeon and was only using a knife. When his whole job is fighting with guns, then when his teammates get beat up by a drake he’s like “ what do I do?” Use the gun. The author is just really bad at writing .

From the little I've read, I see that the character buildup is quite okay. But I also noticed that it's too Japanese. I feel like I'm reading an anime, if that's possible. it's a recommendable work though. Nice job.

Unfortunately, I can't recommend this story. It has wasted so much of my time with filler content. The dialogue, plot, conflicts, and even character development are all uninteresting. I read this because it had a nice story idea, but that was all it had. A nice idea. In reality the story was boring, character's personalities are unknown even to the author, so much so that they are inconsistent, character backgrounds are the same here as well, so don't have high expectations for that either. The world is extreemly generic and boring. This looks like it was made in ChatGPT.