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2024-11-03 21:27

I don’t what to say, the premise is good but maybe chapter 16 and 17 better remove and his mother there made me lose sense of immersion.

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-Ok overall I just want to say that the quality of writing is extremely good. You really get the classroom of the elite vibe from how the author starts off chapters, along with good grammar and format. Definitely a 5 star author when it comes to writing skills. -The updated stability I rated 4 stars because there aren’t many chapters out yet and I binged all of them so I’m not sure how consistent the author is. Based on the time each chapter came out though I thought 4 stars was adequate. -Ok story development I rated as a 3 stars. Not to be harsh just because as I stated before there aren’t too many chapters out at this point of writing my review. Also because I’m on the fence about a plot point the author introduced, but I will see what direction they take with it and not be like you keyboard warriors and complain about it until they just stop updating their story. -For character design how could I not rate this a 5 stars. Its an extremely unique take for a classroom of the elite fanfiction. I love how the author starts the main storyline right as yamauchi would be getting expelled. Yet the person whos thoughts we follow as yamauchi also gets good background and isn’t extremely overpowered. -Finally I rated the world background as a solid 4 start. I’m not going to just give out a 5 star rating just because I’m all caught up on the light novels. I feel like as long as you know the world of classroom of the elite you will enjoy this story. Comprehensive overall rating is a 4.2 as of chapter 20 hope this review encourages more readers to this book. Let’s blow this 💩 up guys trust me this author has talent!

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