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2024-06-22 11:30

Five stars all around, this is a masterclass of writing. The MC isn't the smartest, or strongest, and at the moment, he isn't well-liked by the class (for good reason) and that's a great thing. The tension between the MC and the other characters was a joy to read. The drama, inter-personal relationships and mind-games are great to read. Keep up the good work, it feels like this story is going to be a blast.

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-Ok overall I just want to say that the quality of writing is extremely good. You really get the classroom of the elite vibe from how the author starts off chapters, along with good grammar and format. Definitely a 5 star author when it comes to writing skills. -The updated stability I rated 4 stars because there aren’t many chapters out yet and I binged all of them so I’m not sure how consistent the author is. Based on the time each chapter came out though I thought 4 stars was adequate. -Ok story development I rated as a 3 stars. Not to be harsh just because as I stated before there aren’t too many chapters out at this point of writing my review. Also because I’m on the fence about a plot point the author introduced, but I will see what direction they take with it and not be like you keyboard warriors and complain about it until they just stop updating their story. -For character design how could I not rate this a 5 stars. Its an extremely unique take for a classroom of the elite fanfiction. I love how the author starts the main storyline right as yamauchi would be getting expelled. Yet the person whos thoughts we follow as yamauchi also gets good background and isn’t extremely overpowered. -Finally I rated the world background as a solid 4 start. I’m not going to just give out a 5 star rating just because I’m all caught up on the light novels. I feel like as long as you know the world of classroom of the elite you will enjoy this story. Comprehensive overall rating is a 4.2 as of chapter 20 hope this review encourages more readers to this book. Let’s blow this 💩 up guys trust me this author has talent!

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