Another great novel by Mobisa. Hopefully you don't leave us hanging in the middle of it all and kindl continue with the same update stability. Wish you all the best.

It's a really good novel, if anything should be said about it is, It's really well written, has a good, and more importantly, continous development. it doesn't falter, and stuff happens and gets done. however, as there are few chapters where characters interact with each other, there is a lack of knowledge we as readers have about them. but it will solve itself in the next few chapters, I believe. the same goes with the world background, although you can tell it's almost the same world as where we live. In the beginning, there is some stuff hinting that this world has a supernatural/magical/fantastical side to it, but it just hasn't appeared yet. this makes the novel lack its own unique approach. although it isn't bad to (sometimes) not have a unique approach, I feel that this novel could benefit very much from it. maybe make it so that some specific people can use magic, and there are the typical magical races, but they are hidden in the Amazon Jungle, or they are in a deep slumber waiting for the so called "awakening of spiritual energy". there are many more things that can be done. author, you can freely use my ideas if you want, I can also give you more if you need/want. just comment under any of my comments or even under this review. you can also contact me in Discord @NaruSenku. I'm always willing give a helping hand to authors.

This isn’t a story, this is a kid’s wish for power being fulfilled and then everything is magically fixed because AI.

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Though i am more of eastern fantasy.tge book is definitely a worth read. Reading it makes me wanna possess that system that can basically improve everything. All in all, kudos to the author for this master piece.

It has a great start especially the second chapter that was epic bro