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2024-12-29 04:46

this was hella interesting (thanks for your hard work author )

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Noi2002
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Thank you! <3

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Kenshoen
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Ok, just finished reading 19 chapters today after finding this novel, though currently there are 25 chapters available in this novel. And i think i have read enough to write a review. let's talk about the story first. It had a very soft pace—I mean, it was not fast nor slow. The author did a good job narrating the story and maintaining a consistent pace throughout.(making it difficult for me to believe that this is the author's first novel). I also found no problems with the writing/translation quality. If you have read the synopsis, this story delivered exactly what you would expecte without any lack. So read the synopsis carefully, if you are very picky with what novel you read (I am extremely picky regarding this). The author removed unnecessary details from the novel, allowing the story to flow smoothly. it also has some mystery elements, some maybe dark? The author did a good job developing the personalities of the male and female characters up to this point in the chapter. This novel has promising potential for a light novel. Of course, this is not a 500+ chapter novel, but rather a short story with a good plot. Now enough of the positive review.. Now the reason why I am dropping it. If you have read the synopsis, you will have a hunch about the MC's potential to become a yandere, which I believe is a possible character development. And this is what I find uninteresting. Seeing both leads go crazy at each other is not fun for me. Anyway, I recommend that you try reading this novel. You will undoubtedly get hooked. Reading this book made me think of another book, Behind the Screen, which is the only yandere book I have ever finished.

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