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13KillerShadows
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2024-09-29 19:41

this is a comment i made when the author had a note on a chapter saying people weren't happy with him lately. I figured it would make a decent review up till this point (end of first major arc/milestone) I wonder why the author's been getting flak? while this arc has been kinda long, it has been established that this is a massive step for the MC, we'll likely get a similar length arc for each milestone which is normal. is it because the priests somehow teleported from inside the inner city factory to the outer city? figured that was just part of the part that got cut out on webnovel. is it characters? these are some of the best characters I've seen in a Chinese webnovel. they're consistent, both in personality and intelligence. creativity? the author is pretty much slightly twisting Warhammer 40k, but that's kinda a plus, it's a well thought out and constructed universe. i could go on but it's pretty good so far

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Ak_Gamer_Third
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yeah and I don't need to know about WH 40k to understand this novel is good thing too

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