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Jaxon_Steele
Jaxon_SteeleLv113mth
2024-09-10 04:22

why can't the author/translator reread his own works? there are so many inconsistencies that it's pathetic

Evolving infinitely from ground zero

Bamboo City's Little Overlord
3.5
577 Chs

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jeansceem
jeansceemLv3

I was interested in the power system but, this diaper wearing little girl pee stuff is just too repulsing. I let it slide the first few chapters but, the author just kept repeating the same thing. ‘Look at her crotch she pees herself’ ‘she is so old but she still wears a diaper’ like my god we understand, you don’t have to bring it up every single chapter. I stopped at chapter 10. I have read some wild stuff, but… this is just…ew.

3mth

TheGodlyFateFox
TheGodlyFateFoxLv14

Free chapters 27. From reading the free chapters, the translation quality is good. There is no face slapping which is great. The mc does hide some of his power but don't worry. He shows enough power and talent to make him a genius. He is the top of his class in all school year.

5mth
Ivis_Ire
Ivis_IreLv3

Read about 200 chapters, the start was amazing from a "fantasy and reincarnation" novel point of view. But the story is starting to get boring, the author is playing for the time in development. Don't misunderstand, I have read slow paced novels before and liked them but this is not like that. Even if there is no action, the overall development is monotonous and the lewd scenes are childish and dull.

4mth
Hubby_000
Hubby_000Lv4

MC is good but sometimes story makes long boring

5mth
MalKenDov
MalKenDovLv12

5 stars. I like it. it's a story i would binge read over a week if I had the money for webnovel

5mth
Serienkuschler
SerienkuschlerLv13

Until Chapter 100 it was a very nice read but afterwards the Author began to split the Chapters in multiple parts and make them shorter with almost no process in between, just to milk more money from his viewers. After reading until Chapter 150 I chose to drop it because it just isn't worth reading anymore, very sad.

2mth
Necroman123
Necroman123Lv13

Too slow and boring. The romance is even more boring and not needed, half of the novel is only about romance 😢

3mth
Beefthoven
BeefthovenLv13

Exactly 100 chapters deep and nearly every single one mentioned diapers and/or bed wetting. The writing and world background are solid. This book is perfect if you have a pee fetish and care more about grooming than cultivation.

2mth
bookdevourerworm
bookdevourerwormLv15

started out great but as the story progresses, mcs story revolves too much around his childhood friend. tried giving it a chance and got to 140+ chapters but it got more on the romance side than cultivation. ive dropped this but great writing author it is just that the novel aint for me.

3mth
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