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Captain_SpoilerLv138mth
2024-08-05 16:21

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a translator novel.. You might think why there are no tags.. Here is the tag that suits this novel: #NoHarem #Weak-to-Strong #Action #System #Superpower #Magic Well, I pretty sure that this translator is just translating the novel without care to read the story.. He has not taken this work seriously and is doing this dilly dally.. The translation is good at the beginning, don't feel like MTL at all. BUT As chapters progress further, the quality of the translation gets worse from time to time.. The name of "thing" are not constant, they changing sometimes.. For example, MC has a skill called Mental Immunity, but sometimes, this translator wrote Spiritual Immunity.. Another example is that there is a guy named Joseph, but sometimes, the translator uses Jose or Josef or Yose.. He is the same person, but there is different spelling on every occasion.. Then the snake monster skill name also changed from "Stalk - Python" to "Lurk - Python".. Sometimes, this translator also wrote the wrong person name.. For example, it actually the other character speaks, but the translator wrote MC name instead, such as, "Tao Yu also glanced at Li Le, perhaps he too found Tao Yu a bit displeasing." It looks like Tao Yu displease with Tao Yu.. lol.. The story seems to have potential and attractive but the more you read, the more your expectations drop significantly.. Until you finally got no interest in reading this novel anymore.. The beginning is quite boring.. Even when I read this novel, I did not fully understand many things.. I'm not sure if it is because the author is not good in explanation or the translator is doing a poor job.. There is no gauge or parameter of the system, which makes it harder to understand.. After killing monster, no EXP.. I also don't understand if there any drop after the monster die.. MC is super duper poor.. Plus, Yuan Force kinda likes currency?? I thought it was like mana or something.. Seriously, I feel like I have become an ADHD person reading this.. So I stopped reading this novel.. Maybe my English is just not that good to understand the flow of this story..

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austin_kutz
austin_kutzLv15

Also, the translator confuses pronouns so often that I'm getting a little 2nd hand embarrassment. He/she are not freely interchangeable. The story itself is pretty good. Also, add overpowered, weak to strong, and romance to the tags. The MC is in the process of romancing the big boss lady of his region.

IsekaidFred
IsekaidFredLv14

yuan force is currency but can also be used to speed up time for upgrading skills. as you said, maybe your English may not be as good as you thought, or your short-term memory is not very good.

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