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Ultimate_Boss
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It was good until the MC decided to upload the martial techniques he got from another world without any preparation. I mean wasn’t he worried about them finding out about the door? Yes he wants to avoid being conscripted but at least there should be an explanation as to why he uploaded it without hesitation or worry that it might backfire on him cause how is he supposed to explain its origin I just hope it doesn’t continue going downhill from there

Comprehension Ability: Creating and teaching the Dao in various worlds

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Eshura
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Raw : Creating Heavenly Laws

Eimin
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Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).

Ultimate_Boss
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I’ve read further and I understand the problem is those kinds of situations should be further explained and used as an opportunity to build up on the world development although the author did it later it affects the reading experience Imagine if the MC is in a world where his sect is the strongest in the world but we as readers don’t know then he proceeds to do something that would cause him major trouble if his sect wasn’t the strongest in the world wouldn’t he look foolish and some people might skip before realizing the truth

Eimin:Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).
Ultimate_Boss
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I agree it’s interesting

Eimin:Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).
Ultimate_Boss
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Thanks

Eshura:Raw : Creating Heavenly Laws
arsresh
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hi

Ultimate_Boss
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Hello

arsresh:hi