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Fickle_as_light
Fickle_as_lightLv47mth
2024-05-28 00:05

the author is clearly new so lets cut his some slack. but the idea is intresting. and my sincere advice to author is "bro what you think up in your head is a summary so you have to develop it". you should do more showing instead of telling the book feels like a summary and if you are using a ai then pls try to decrease it cuz it feels inorganic. and above all keep cooking

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white_poison
white_poisonLv4

what about mine

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