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Okwa_dat_Igbo_girl
Okwa_dat_Igbo_girlLv1510mth
2024-06-24 13:37

This was a great read. Just over 500 chapters. shirt and sweet. it did seem rushed towards the end, but the rush also kind of pulled you along, making you try to read faster to see what happens next. loose ends were all tied up. One thing I would have loved to see was some romance with Master Mo asthe ML. But there was none. She fulfilled her mission and walked. I guess I now understand why some people complain about romance destracting from a story. im still all about romance, so I'm just writing a follow-up story in my head about a post-immortality romance happening with Master Mo. Thank you author

The Arrogant Immortal

Brahma Deficiency
4.6
504 Chs

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Okwa_dat_Igbo_girl
Okwa_dat_Igbo_girlLv15

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Alani_Foreigner07
Alani_Foreigner07Lv4

Master Mo as in Mo Chuan? I've been trying to see who's the ML

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Okwa_dat_Igbo_girl
Okwa_dat_Igbo_girlLv15

I don't remember his full name right now. but if he's the one that the book mentioned was her first love that she hid deeply in her heart in her first life, then yes. There is no male lead, though. in her first life, Master Mo stole one of her lucky stuff. this put him on her hit list. (although we find that he just did it to get at her previous life husband and never actually used it). even though there are hints that she still has him hidden deep in her heart, she is focused on her mission, and romance never happens.

Alani_Foreigner07:Master Mo as in Mo Chuan? I've been trying to see who's the ML
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Wijay4
Wijay4Lv13

now i'm curious about your ending scene. kindly share the link..

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Good read for a Female Cultivation novel. Interesting and enjoyable. Biggest problem I have is the name keeps changing and it gets confusing whose who. It makes me want to just pull my hair and scream! Especially when they say the female villain's name in place where it should be the FL's name. So annoying.

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Was a good novel then they decided to complete it without actually ending the novel?? The novel definitely doesn’t end at 504 chapters. It doesn’t even end on a cliff hanger. It’s like they stopped mid sentence and died. I’m a lil confused. I’m hoping there is a book 2 maybe. Cause there is so much that was unfinished.

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