I as any other author rate my own book with a 5 star ⭐⭐ I first want to start of with a rant . please pardon my anger . First of all . I know my punctuation is kinda shit and all but who said I don't know that already . Some random guy comes to my FANFIC and tries to start advising me as if he can do a better job .( which he can't . I checked out his bio ) and two , at no point was I forcing anyone to donate to my Ko-fi account. That's why it's called a donation . Which a certain once again bozo failed to comprehend . Just to know the bozo , I will not deleat any reviews on this book and therefore for those curious they will be able to easily find him . Like seriously , what does guy expect from a fanfic which I'm writing on my own and also editing on my own . Does he expect it to be some sort of artisticall literature . If only I could block certain people on this app . My day would just be better . End of runt I won't call my self a master of English but i think I am able to right a good fanfic with all the info on the adventure time world Thank you to all my supporters and to all those judgmental hater eat shit

Only on chapter one haven’t even read it except first paragraph all I gotta say is I don’t even care if this novels writing is only mid or grammars not good we legit never get adventure time fanfics and when we do they stop after ten chapters so all I gotta say is don’t ever stop writing this until the end please and thank you here is a gif as a gift

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finally we got a adventure time fanfic its's so faking rare in webnovel and harem too, it like my soul finally found it peace.

At the moment I love this story because it transmits to me the same thing as when I watched the series as a child, I just hope that it transmits to me the same fear that the lich produced in me and if the romance with the girls is good, that's how it would be. The best Adventure Time fanfic of all time.

it's an alright story. the only thing i have against it is that there isn't much of a story to me, just a lot of the Mc monologuing..

I liked the backstory before he got reincarnated.

overall I loved the story so far... shout out to the author for notice the problem and even planning on how to fix such issues I am looking forward to more

This is the first Adventure Time fanfiction I've read and I love it. I feel like I've become a kid again and I'm having fun with Finn and Jake's adventures. Although I'm more of an adult now and that makes it better for me. For now I love it, I don't know how the romances will develop (if they'll be cringe or natural), how well crafted the canon or story adventures will be and how strong he'll become. But if Finn manages to accomplish his list of goals, I think it will be very satisfying. PDT: Don't forget the most beautiful waifus, like Princess Bubblegum, Marceline or Flame Princess.