Its still early on so take this with a grain of salt but mc changes nothing like he is more of a “third person” just watching everything with some funny jokes every now and then, like I said it’s still early so this can change I just hope this isn’t like every other tbate fic

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I can't say much, but the first few chapters don't look bad. I just hope the story doesn't fall off in the middle, or start giving away powers to the super OP protagonist at the beginning of the story. I'm really tired of Stories where characters are given the power to manipulate reality and they've only been in their new world for 2 minutes, or they're 3 or 4 years old and already the most powerful on the continent. I will be updating this, to see how the next chapters go in the next week.

This novel is from one of best Tbate i ever read its so good and mc is op and take xare of hos brother(Arthur)

This is a good novel the only problem I have is there are not enough ch please don’t drop it

The story is going really well. It's an honor that the author is of the same nationality as me. I hope you continue writing the story. The story has great potential, but I don't think the character should specifically choose the powers he gives to others.

Una gran historia, vale totalmente leerla. Tiene sus errores y más pero son mínimos y cree no te arrepentirás de leer esto, ve y comprueba hasta el cap 2, ahí es cuando la historia se hace más fluida y va sin problemas.

a nice novel ..............................................................................................................................................

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