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One of the few Op character stories where it's not boring and trying to have everything be super complicated gods and multiversal battles Bros just living life could be more detail added but otherwise great story
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Filthythree
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You're rushing past arks which is cool in the beginning but after that every chapter becomes a summery more then a chapter just doesn't feel personalized or immersed in a story I'm just browsing a newspaper more looking at the highlights
Filthythree:I'm sorry I don't really understand what you meant , did you mean adding more details to the world ?