Bro some time grammer is confusing but overall story is going nice and bro make it su yan and other become his wife Bye bye 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
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LIKEEvillangal389:Thank you for your thoughtfulness, I will try to correct my writing as much as I can. As you can see from the 5 chapters this fanfic will be a long fanfic so your opinion is very important