Item: Spirit Game
Rating: 5
Author: ELf_19

ELf_19Lv123mth

2024-08-12 15:03

Update on my review: writing quality: not really picky with this, but the novel has good english and every sentence is easy to understand. Updating Stability: Good. Updates everyday Story Development: Very Good: Each arc is unique and the characters are growing as well as the world bulding Character Design: At first i thought he’s only an average joe but he’s a genius and hard working World Bacground: Each arc takes us to deffirent setting and world building. I luv t

Spirit Game

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