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1. I could have read it wrong but it sounds like you give a godlike entity human morals. The concept of death wouldn't be impactful to someone who would inevitably come back. 2. Its not fully clear how he is both a concept level spirit but has low level spirit power. 3. i apologize if this sounds rude but since he's the spirit of knowledge wouldn't it be better if he studied the theory behind earthbending, and then apply it. it low key sounds like hed be more of a wizard then a warrior like this bumi person is.
Avatar, the spirit of knowledge
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Answers: 2) The fact that he is born with a complete concept makes him a concept-level spirit, however his inexperience and inability to utilise and understand his concept holds him back in the power department, effectively making him a baby holding a nuke. He has immense power but he is unable to use it. 3) I am planning to make him understand his powers through experience without spoon feeding him everything. 1) The concept-level spirits are indeed something akin to gods, however you must remember that Solon is only 100 years old. That makes him an infant that can influence the world itself. I have shown them as human like in order to use it as character development. In this story I aim to make spirits act with no care about infants, only humans care about kids. If the other concept-level spirits allow Solon to do whatever he wants without showing care they would have a emotionless spirit of their level that could potentially lead to catastrophic results. As such they teach him how to feel real emotions. As for the death part, for a spirit to come back millions of years are needed as well as a concept that is nessessart for the world to run. Solon is young, which means that time passes way slower for him in comparison to the others as such it’s less of fear of death and more like fear of separation.
As for this part, even if he knows that his siblings are way stronger than him it doesn't mean that he can take the risk. The fact that there are spirits of his level, he is unaware of makes it possible for his family to be attacked. He can't be sure if the fight would lead to complere erasure or just a period of separation until his siblings are reborn. He can't be sure that the spirit that will come back will be the one that was taken away. He doesn't have enough knowledge yet, which is ironic considering it's his concept. Plus internal fights can take place, he has seen Vaatu and Raava kill each other every 10 thousand years to decide the worlds fate. Just because Wan and Korra sealed Vaatu and I haven't shown them actually kill each other it doesn't mean it never happened.
Madison_Anderson_7528:1 Building further from number one. He definitely knows his siblings are all stronger then him so there is no reason to be worried, and even if its supposed to be an irrational fear he doesn't know how they can die. 2.