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DaoistCudg85
DaoistCudg85Lv143mth
2024-09-15 01:08

Over all, a good story, however something has happened where chapters 124-133 are a regurgitation of prvious chapters. the story is moving in one direction to suddenly jump back to a completely different area and plot. What's going on? Author, please correct this problem.

The Last Incubus with The Vice and Valor System

Justin_Gabventure
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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureAuthor

sorry, would fix that soon, this week, busy with school

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DaoistCudg85
DaoistCudg85Lv14

Thank you for the reply, I would like to say, although I look forward to the fixes and story progression. You should just focus on the more important things in life; fix the flawed chapters and add to your story when you have the appropriate time to produce good work. Rushing through projects only creates a flawed result and disappointment.

Justin_Gabventure:sorry, would fix that soon, this week, busy with school
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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureAuthor

Will try to fill at least 3 per day... and don't worry, it's not rushed, Ive got plot ready

DaoistCudg85:Thank you for the reply, I would like to say, although I look forward to the fixes and story progression. You should just focus on the more important things in life; fix the flawed chapters and add to your story when you have the appropriate time to produce good work. Rushing through projects only creates a flawed result and disappointment.
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