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DaoistCudg85
DaoistCudg85Lv157mth
2024-09-15 01:08

Over all, a good story, however something has happened where chapters 124-133 are a regurgitation of prvious chapters. the story is moving in one direction to suddenly jump back to a completely different area and plot. What's going on? Author, please correct this problem.

The Last Incubus with The Vice and Valor System

Justin_Gabventure
4.1
198 Chs

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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureAuthor

sorry, would fix that soon, this week, busy with school

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DaoistCudg85
DaoistCudg85Lv15

Thank you for the reply, I would like to say, although I look forward to the fixes and story progression. You should just focus on the more important things in life; fix the flawed chapters and add to your story when you have the appropriate time to produce good work. Rushing through projects only creates a flawed result and disappointment.

Justin_Gabventure:sorry, would fix that soon, this week, busy with school
7mth
Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureAuthor

Will try to fill at least 3 per day... and don't worry, it's not rushed, Ive got plot ready

DaoistCudg85:Thank you for the reply, I would like to say, although I look forward to the fixes and story progression. You should just focus on the more important things in life; fix the flawed chapters and add to your story when you have the appropriate time to produce good work. Rushing through projects only creates a flawed result and disappointment.
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Another Shameless Review from the Author... My words apart , this book is very deserving of the 5-star review from me, I'm sure you reading this and many others readers would agree with me after giving this book a try. For cultured daoists like me out there, if you see this novel and skip it over, I the author tell you that you're really missing a lot... There'll be plenty of wholesome scenes and vanillas that you guys would like a lot ... Smut apart, this book has thick plot and doesn't focus on the smut at all, read the first 5 chapters and you'll get what I mean... I'm pretty confident that I cooked something good, probably one of the best in wn..

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good job author, couldn't stop till I reached the latest chapter, keep it up...wonderful book[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Read up to the latest chapter at the moment, and I must say the MC really did a good job, this book is unique... (Spoiler) The Mc reaction when he got betrayed is something I didn't expect and I guarantee no one would expect that, not only that, the mystery part of the Mc is very intriguing, it would be very satisfying for me to unveil that mystery of his past that you keep hinting at.. Good job author, the five star review is well deserved...

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mc is a simp [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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The story is fun and interesting, or it would be, if Author Sama decided to develop it instead of bombarding us with snu snu. In his own review he says the novel has a thick plot, but in reality one whole third is just lemons. It's all nice and dandy, but 32 chapters of snu snu over 97 chapters is too much. Seriously, we get that he is an incubus, we really do, but we have too little story among all the lemonade.

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Jinxed_Mayhem
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Great work. Never knew I could enjoy a work under this genre😅😅🤯🤯❤️❤️ keep it up Author

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Daoist3nYYua
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Gave it a go and read the first few chapters - found the development of the storyline and characters pretty solid and consistent. Looking forward to the full story ◡̈

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