It’s good and has a decent plot but it’s just all over the place and half the time I have no idea what’s happening. The grammar needs to be checked and the dialogue needs to change from just being cussing and have more coherent conversations. Other than that the books pretty good

Good start to the novel. The story is blend of mystery, slight romance(currently but probably more in the future), fantasy. The characters in the novel are well developed and not rushed at all. Furthermore, the plot is engaging and I just can’t wait for more chapters to be released.

The author, Starting of the Novel is quite interesting and intriguing. Honestly, I like this... Well, I want to give a 5-star rating but you know this is just starting therefore I can't give you one. But Novel Deserve it. I would appreciate it if you after posting the chapters, read them slowly and with focus so you can avoid any spelling mistakes or errors...It will be quite helpful and don't get offended because this is just advice.

I have no idea what I'm reading, no idea who the characters are, no idea what is the background, the year, the names and motivations of the characters, not even a hint. Read this book as if you were starting from the second or third in a series of books and it might make sense, we're being bombarded with characters and information that are introduced in three lines and that's it.