All right, proper review now that I am up to chap 61. The first ten chaps are somewhat rushed, with the first four being the worst in terms of pacing. After which, the pacing stabilizes. Quality? Pretty good, I would say. I admit that I use Gpt to help me edit from time to time, and in the first few chaps it was really noticable. But after the first ten-ish chaps is when I get an actually good prompt for it so that if I end up using it for editing it doesn't make the story robotic. I don't always use it, but when I do, it's not too in your face. (I hope) For cases when Gpt is used, it is purely to edit the already written text. I don't use it to write out paragraphs. What's the point in writing then? It's still predominantly my own writing, and I avoid using it whenever possible. However, it does help to fix up paragraphs and organize the structure slightly Story Development? Pretty good, while it follows the rails of the original story, I beleive I do enough changes to make the story my own. And post Walpurgis, it will mostly, if not completely abandon the rails of the original. Using the world to further the story. Character design? Pretty happy with how it turned out too. Shuna was a tad rushed, but then I work on her and expand on her character. Same for most of the relevant characters. I feel like I did a relatively good job on developing them. World background? I mean, it's tensura. But yes, I am being pretty careful not to break the world and follow the rules already laid out world while writing. Mistakes happen here and there, but for the most part I try to keep stuff as good as it can be. Now, onto the prophet stuff. A lot of people didn't like it. That's fine. Not for you. While not a major plot point post Orc disaster, it still shows up from time to time. And it is somewhat relevant to events that will happen in the future.

Hello everyone! Author here with my legally mandated review. This is a rewrite of my original story. But I do have a lot of changes planned as I go. You could say that this is more like a fanfic of my fanfic lol. Anyways, I hope all of you enjoy.

A good story so far, I just hope you won't drop the novel [Google Translate]

I always wondered why OG Rimuru do not have a funking Harem, when in FF such as this one he has it.? Heck he is also from Slime Race, who do not have gender at all in this story to.!!! but you still want to give him bunch of waifus, Btw will Suphia become his wife to.? i like her a lot since i saw her the first time watching anime, she is a tomboy and she is also nice and kind and Has lots of honor plus she is strong and Has great looks to.

Dang it Bas! I wanted to be the first review. But anyway if you wanna read a good Tensura fic , read this one. I read the previous version many times and this one is way better from the start. Looking forward to more.

Interesting start so far, looking forward to seeing how the story changes due to our protagonist's interference.

Nice fanfic,i like these characters,but sometimes there have boring chapters,but without them we can't continue story

Well first it’s a bit too rushed for me reads more like a summary than a story. Second 4 chapters in and he is thinking with his D already in your first story i could tolarate since I was interested in the powerprogression but here it ticks me off. Also he doesn’t have human hormones so things that manly happen bc of hormones and not bc of thought (like morals should behave differently) Also the fact that he wants a harem is different than actively going for it or it just happening wanting one in your head is one thing going for it makes me question his character and it happening is a result of majin having a different culture. Also I hope there will be no reincarnators und the harem since that would be very hard to believe. Well this is mostly a rant about the things that would destroy the novel for me sorry if it’s all over the place.

--------Me like story very much.--------

I thought this version would be boring & full of plot holes BUT imagine my surprise when i started reading this and found it really written so beautifully..