Review Detail of Devotion in Pokemon Hentai: Transmigrated to Pokemon World with Absolute Hypnosis

Writing has the basics of storytelling down, however overall lacks direction and creativity. Includes the addition of a system which is quite mundane. The main character lacks any unique qualities, just an average pervert. I acknowledge the author for picking up the pen for a story about Pokémon as there are not much deviations one can make from the main story. This story however isn’t worth being continued on the basis of it corrupt concept of mind control into the formation of a broken minded harem. I’d recommend newer fanfic writers to start with a intriguing idea and aversion towards multiple female leads as it’s hard to get the characters right without experience. This story is better left to be found on AO3z