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ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv43mth
2024-12-28 18:14

story is quite nice and amazing. Story progression is quite nice and instead of the boring cannon which most of the author uses which makes the story kind of dull like you know what will happen but in this story the story takes place or starts before the cannon and is much more interesting than the cannon MC is morally grey and is more of a anti hero type, will not hesitate to wipe a whole town if it will benifit him more if you have read the fanfics of Darkwolfshiro you will know his character leans more towards kuro hope author increases the update speed and also the length of each chapter is quite nice and are long hope you will maintain this

The Seraphic System

TotallyNotSnipez
4.7
69 Chs

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aMz
aMzLv11

Great story, this one is alot like "Mortal God of Olympus" which you probably got a lot from, i can't say that it's better than it, but considering you are still posting chapters in your Fic... it's alot better on this front than MGO, i hope you keep going and finish your story

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Demons_Ki
Demons_KiLv1

filler so far[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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R0B
R0BLv2

It's great fanfic, the only thing I didn't like is the length of chapters and the focus on unrelated characters, when a summary should have been enough. As of chapter 31 dxd arc (canon) didn't start yet, can't wait for the real action to begin ^^

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R3D_12
R3D_12Lv13

A very fun read so far, I can honestly say that I enjoyed all of it. I also like where it's going, not just keeping it like the cliche dxd fics that only have the character stay in Japan. This one does way more than most in just a few chapters. Mc is also cool if u ask me. Can't wait for what comes next.

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No0BxD
No0BxDLv4

I am very sorry I tried to give it a 5 as I genuinely liked it a lot. Reason for 4.8: One star off for story development as our MC is delaying the reveal too much and I feel like the Angels wont be like fully under his beck and call but more like groomers without listening to his orders. Other then that this is a great read so far I was so vested in this read that I was about to one off a star in 'Stability of Updates' hah! What I would do here; as the MC is very cautious of angels and what his relationship will be with them, and you have portrayed the feel of the angels, specially the Arch/ Seraphic ones would not be fanatically under him even though what happened at the Vatican City should indicate the the exempt of Michael perhaps almost all angels would throw themselves under him. I would make this a reality (That is me, NOT you! you are doing great and I don't want to look like I want you to follow me, this is just what I would do.) :)

1mth
WHIFL
WHIFLLv4

Good enough dsadadasmdfjsahfhhsagfsggfqsfguwsbdcs dfdfsfsfwefwfwfwfwfwdfwwf dqdqdqdqdqdsdqdsmjqkqdqvbvscgjvsacavcgvsagcvacvuavfyvfwvfewtgv

6mth
tweaked_genesis
tweaked_genesisLv1

A very good story as the author builds upon the existing world and we get to see the angelic side as well. Tho perhaps you should add some tags in the story mr author, for visibility as the story deserves way more views.

7d
Hidden_Wrath
Hidden_WrathLv4

for anybody wondering yes this is a harem story unfortunate but it's fine so far and the author seems good enough

25d
0DarkWolf0
0DarkWolf0Lv1

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