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2024-06-10 20:12

as long as the author doesn't mess up the next chapter, this will be a top danmachi fanfiction.The potential for story development is also very large with fresh and new concepts, the other 5 souls also seem to have brains, are not like cardboard and have real personalities. The preparation of the storyline is quite thorough, and does not contain bland chapters that only increase the number of chapters. Overall I like the story, it's just that I'm a little worried about the chapter update schedule, the author is like someone who writes because he wants to, and can disappear anytime when the desire to write is not there, so apart from the update schedule, I will give 5 stars.

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