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Ratman27
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2024-10-06 23:44

La verdad es una gran historia. Pero es muy lenta, pensar que estoy por el capítulo 70 y aún en un chico de 12 años… Aún así me gusto y pude continuar leyendo, pero ahora que agregó mas drama con un OC que al parecer ahora va a ocupar gran parte de la historia, siento que esto solo va a ser más lento. Si estoy hubiera seguido solo con Troy sin enfocarme mucho más en otros entonces podría haber seguido aceptando lo lenta que es la historia porque está bien escrita. Pero ahora ya no estoy interesado en seguir leyendo esto. Aún así recomiendo que la lean ya que es interesante y esta bien hecha.

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Ratman27
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No soy muy fanático de los personajes OC pero los acepto, pero cuando se les empieza a dar mucha importancia me aburre. Y eso pasó en esta historia

FableWeaver
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Thank you for the review. Although, I don't think you are completely correct. I know that you are talking about Evan, but he really is not the main character. After the arc which you read last, he will not have that big of a role and the story goes back to focus on Troy.

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FableWeaver:Thank you for the review. Although, I don't think you are completely correct. I know that you are talking about Evan, but he really is not the main character. After the arc which you read last, he will not have that big of a role and the story goes back to focus on Troy.
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