webnovel
Ratman27
Ratman27Lv21mth
2024-10-06 23:44

La verdad es una gran historia. Pero es muy lenta, pensar que estoy por el capítulo 70 y aún en un chico de 12 años… Aún así me gusto y pude continuar leyendo, pero ahora que agregó mas drama con un OC que al parecer ahora va a ocupar gran parte de la historia, siento que esto solo va a ser más lento. Si estoy hubiera seguido solo con Troy sin enfocarme mucho más en otros entonces podría haber seguido aceptando lo lenta que es la historia porque está bien escrita. Pero ahora ya no estoy interesado en seguir leyendo esto. Aún así recomiendo que la lean ya que es interesante y esta bien hecha.

Dreams of Stardom (Hollywood SI)

FableWeaver
4.8
111 Chs

Liked by 3 people

LIKE
Replies3
Ratman27
Ratman27Lv2

No soy muy fanático de los personajes OC pero los acepto, pero cuando se les empieza a dar mucha importancia me aburre. Y eso pasó en esta historia

1mth
FableWeaver
FableWeaverAuthor

Thank you for the review. Although, I don't think you are completely correct. I know that you are talking about Evan, but he really is not the main character. After the arc which you read last, he will not have that big of a role and the story goes back to focus on Troy.

1mth
N_RR
N_RRLv4

You stopped updating? All well?

FableWeaver:Thank you for the review. Although, I don't think you are completely correct. I know that you are talking about Evan, but he really is not the main character. After the arc which you read last, he will not have that big of a role and the story goes back to focus on Troy.
29d
Other Reviews
FableWeaver
FableWeaverAuthor

Shameless 5-star review. Because why not? I hope you all like this story as much as I liked writing it. Shoot any question in the comments and I'll try to answer all.

6mth

MadnessReborn
MadnessRebornLv1

Finally, a reincarnation Hollywood story that doesn't rush to make a superstar out of the protagonist. I really love the direction this is going and would love to see the development of Troy. Keep up the good work! I don't know about others, but I love the dark tones you are using in the story.

6mth
Worldofimagination
WorldofimaginationLv12

I’ve really enjoyed it so far; the pacing of the events is perfect, without rushing anything. I also like the MC’s personality. I just hope he isn’t the type of MC who is good at everything. I’ve read other novels where the protagonist acts, sings, writes comics, is a hacker… that makes the story a bit too overpowered. But so far, it’s been really good. I’ve read up to episode 12, and it seems like he’s going to get into singing as well? That’s fine, but I hope his career is more focused on acting with singing as a secondary aspect. Thank you so much for writing this fic, author-sama.

6mth
lamortnoir974
lamortnoir974Lv3

nice but please didn't make the film industry all happy and awesome like other fanfic. .....................................................................

6mth
BloodMonk
BloodMonkLv12

This story has great potential, I can't wait to see where the author takes this story and make this story best...and author Don't Drop midway 🙏🏻🙏🏻

6mth
PolarKuma
PolarKumaLv3

The story is good. The way the story is written is more of like a biography of the MC rather than a novel, in my opinion. The dialogues and acting scenes just exists just to further the monologue. It is not bad if you think of it as it is, since thag is also another way of portraying a story, but if you expected there to be more acting scenes or to dive deeper into the roles, then this story is not it. Like I said every interaction or scene are just a means to further the monologue and not the other way around. And I would it preferred to be the other way around since this is an Acting Story. However, that is just my opinion and personal preference tho. Now for the world builiding. I found it lacking especially in dimension and depth. Hollywood or just the movie world in paticular is very deep and diverse, it wasn't portrayed well in this story or dived deep enough. If I were to suggest references of Hollywood-type novels/stories where they might not be perfect but I personally believe has grasped the essense of Hollywood genre or Acting Stories, they would be: Legendary Actor, & Legendary Hollywood Director. Both are translated by Shallowman here in Webnovel. Now for the main character itself, I find it very hard to connect with him since he acts like a child most of the time. He has the temperament of child when actually he has the soul of an old man literally. You can ignore it most of the time, but can be cringe when you think about it sometimes how he acts like a kid when he's that grown. But that is still a personal opinion and a valid one. You can hear what you want to hear, but believe this review came from a good place and intentions.

2mth
ichigo7ma
ichigo7maLv4

There are some good novels in the webnovel about acting My Hollywood System hollywood system: art Tycoon Actor in Hollywood Hollywood King The Legendary Actor that I hope will light your way to complete your masterpiece, although I have not read it yet, but I am really excited.

5mth
Murod
MurodLv3

it has potential

5mth
Heavy_Space
Heavy_SpaceLv3

you know, you are somewhat of a competitor to me cause i too translate a Hollywood/Entertainment novel(xD), but your novel is awesome enough for me to give you both of my powerstones... while not much has happended considering that I have written this review at just 12 chaps but i like the direction that the author has taken plus the trope that author has written is very unique and i have never seen such a trope even if I have almost all the entertainment novels... hopefully the author continues writing this novel and doesn't drop it...

6mth
Anas_AsBEIY
Anas_AsBEIYLv1

A story about Hollywood I like not to rush to develop It is better to have innovation in stories if he entered the field of writing or entered the field of business such as modifying a movie that lost because of a mistake or the like It is better to see the reaction of people to his actions and actions

6mth
Related Stories

Marvel: A New God's Reign

I am not really that good at writing a synopsis but here goes nothing, * * * Synopsis : An ordinary soul is reincarnated in the Marvel multiverse as a New God, the son of Odin and the Phoenix Force. He is considered a mutant among gods and the messiah of the entire mutant race. He even has a suspicious system that makes him stronger way quicker than the rate gods are supposed to grow at. But all that doesn't matter. What matters is for him to survive and grow as strong as possible to survive the storm coming for him and maybe find a few people whom he can call friends and family. * * * Note : Alternate Universe(s) * * * You can also read chapters in advance by visiting my Pa-treon page, pat reon.com/God_Doom * * * You can also join my discord channel through this link: https://discord.gg/WYVfYe2KNS * * * Author's note : I do not own Marvel or any of its characters other than my own OC.

God_Doom · Movies
4.6
102 Chs

Hogwarts : leveling up the world

http://patreon.com/The_last_airbenderlibrary Would you like to see Rowling's world of magic and your favourite childhood characters in a different environment, more magical than we are shown in the original. Then join our protagonist on his adventure through the world of Harry Potter. Thanks to the world enhancement system, the world of Harry Potter will gradually change beyond recognition . Follow asmodeus and your favourite characters from different universes on a journey to create the strongest magical multiverse empire ! Yes, there were problems with the book at the beginning. I couldn't pick up the writing style, but if you look at the comments under the chapters after chapter 15, you'll realise that the book gets better with each chapter Worlds visited by the protagonist: Harry Potter, Marvel, Game of thrones For all those who are afraid that the author will jump between worlds forgetting about the previous ones - in the tags of the book there is a kingdom building. This is what the protagonist does, the world of Harry Potter is the main world that the protagonist will - develop, protect, conquer ! Important note: this is my original work and although it is fanfic. I in no way claim to be completely faithful to the original, be it the world of Harry Potter or Avatar. This is my story. And I believe that those who simply rewrite the book in their retelling without changing anything are just lazy. my patreon: The_las_airbenderlibrary http://patreon.com/The_last_airbenderlibrary

The_last_airbender · Movies
4.5
142 Chs

Multiverse's Ghost Rider

[A Multiverse Ghost Rider Fanfiction] ---------------------------------------- Jon Vinson, a towering figure with a pallor that contrasted starkly against his raven-black hair, was a mere 22 years old when he found himself on the verge of death on a train. In an unexpected twist of fate, he became the latest incarnation of the Ghost Rider, awakening the Penalty System within his mind. From that moment on, he will be committed to a path of retribution, meting out justice to the wicked across the multiverse of Hollywood's cinematic creations. His primary domain is the Marvel Universe, but his journey would extend to other cinematic universes, including: 1. Harry Potter. 2. Marvel: The Crimson Gem of Cyttorak. 3. Men in Black. 4. Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba 5. American Horror Stories 6. The Boys. 7. ....... --------------------------------------------------------------- Expect 2 chapters a day, 14 chapters a week. ---------------------------------------------------------------- I don't own pretty much anything in this Fanfic, nor the cover photo I put here. ------------------------------------------------- PATREON LINK: patreon.com/TheMightyZeus ------------------------------------------------- Feel free to share your thoughts, theories, and fan art here. Let's come together and delve deeper into the captivating world of our Multiverse's Ghost Rider. Enjoy your time on the Discord page! https://discord.gg/BK8zdjeT

TheMightyZeus · Movies
4.5
197 Chs

Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

Hector King, a man in his 50s, no family or friends to speak of, paralysed from the waist down due to a work-related accident. Now he lived alone with his pup Huskey. But one day, he mistakenly summoned Satan. "Ah, it's been a long time since I was summoned. You found my book? Good, what do you want? Riches? Women? Fame? Strength? Or perhaps, your legs? All at the discounted price of your... soul." Satan offered. Hector, however, didn't need any of that. And so, his answer even shocked Satan, making that smug look disappear. "I... I want you to be my friend." And from there, the friendship that would last eternity started, all at the price of Hector's soul. ... Year 2021, As a mortal, Hector died. But Satan decided to do something crazy, "F*CK IT! You're my best friend, I can't let you die. Hector, I am appointing you as Hell's Inquisitor, a position only under me." ... 1935, Earth Hector found himself in his old original physical body again, but he was now taller and buff. "I-I got a new last name? Hmm, it has a nice ring to it." He muttered. He was, from then on, Hector King Washington. "WOOF!" And the good boy Moony was also there, bigger, buffed and more beautiful. [A/N: MC is going to be a sweet badass old man.] _______________________ [TAGS - OLD MAN MC, OP, SLICE OF LIFE, WHOLESOME, ROMANCE, NO HAREM, ALTERNATE HISTORY, KINGDOM BUILDING] ____________________________ I do not own anything except the main character in this fanfiction. ____________________________ For advance chapters- www.patreon.com/misterimmortal Check out my other fics if you like this one by going into my profile. Thank You.

MisterImmortal · Movies
4.7
300 Chs
Login