It's very poorly written, the idea is good writing quality is horabel💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

....................................................... Seeing the house name was enough for me to quit the story, well done hahahahhahah great success. İts hard to achive this author ........................................................

automatic 1 star for the word filler chapter. plus there's a bunch of time skips in the first and third chapter, you would be doing yourself a favor by skipping this book.

Mc with his mothers death and having no close family joins the rose mercenary group with the goal of eventually becoming a big merchant/mercenary and getting revenge on his mothers family for killing his mother.....(2 year timeskip) ...... Mc is a close friend of Martells wants to be the greatest uncle to the kids and is willing to die for them.atleast mention he met the Martells before or something the entire character of the Mc changed instantly if you're using time skip atleast just give a rough summary of what he was doing

Keeping the tradition of giving myself 5 stars👊🏿

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Well, it is interesting and enjoyable. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Not the best.too many plot holes , a lot of forced relationships , I hated the fact that he chose Snowstark , it's so stupid, it makes me want to cringe every time I read it , these children are not going to thank him for this name, it only reminds us that his house is a bastard house, watched the Targaryens and Baratheons , people almost forget it was a Targaryen bastard who trained him , it lacks originality in short I loved the fact that he made a name for himself before becoming lord

love your stories they keep me interested

good story so far. but why are you monologuing? the norm is "speaking" 'monologuing'